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May 3, 2008
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D200
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85 mm
400
May 3, 2008, 8:47:34 PM
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Brittany

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i would say that this one could do with a more dramatic lighting.... or something. because.... the collar is wearing the model in this one.... because the neck is so blurry. I would say a bigger aperture would have worked better for this one so you could get the texture of the skin as well as the chain.

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I don't entirely disagree with you on that.. it is missing SOMETHING.. alas, I still like it though, I shal take into advisement what you suggested for future though

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yeah. the other chain one on the nipple ring. it worked with a shallow dof because there was still plenty of the model in focus. this one you either need to open up the aperture or do some more manual zooming. less telephotoing.

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